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I'm really sorry to be asking this here as I know that it is a math homework help website. However, I have an english homework question. I have four sentences from an essay that have an error in them somewhere and I can't figure out where. I dont expect anyone here to help me, but i would really apperciate it if any of you might know of a helpful site like this for english? I really appericiate you all taking your time to help students and I thought you might know of a place that could help. Thank you so much!!
I need to revise these sentences and I can’t figure out what I did wrong. Thanks!
At the same time, a five foot five, one hundred
and fifty pound, average women passes by.
Of course the first women with her lanky body
and perfect bone structure is going to stand out.
While the first women should still be the one to
stand out as unusual, it’s the opposite.
The average women would be seen as odd,
undesirable, and unwanted.
