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document.write( "I'm really sorry to be asking this here as I know that it is a math homework help website. However, I have an english homework question. I have four sentences from an essay that have an error in them somewhere and I can't figure out where. I dont expect anyone here to help me, but i would really apperciate it if any of you might know of a helpful site like this for english? I really appericiate you all taking your time to help students and I thought you might know of a place that could help. Thank you so much!!\r \n" );
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document.write( "I need to revise these sentences and I can’t figure out what I did wrong. Thanks!\r \n" );
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document.write( "At the same time, a five foot five, one hundred \n" );
document.write( "and fifty pound, average women passes by.\r \n" );
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document.write( "Of course the first women with her lanky body \n" );
document.write( "and perfect bone structure is going to stand out. \r \n" );
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document.write( "While the first women should still be the one to \n" );
document.write( "stand out as unusual, it’s the opposite. \r \n" );
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document.write( "The average women would be seen as odd, \n" );
document.write( "undesirable, and unwanted.\r \n" );
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